Elevator Pitch No. 2
On my last elevator pitch, there was some great feedback. I was happy to see that they thought my app was a good idea and that they thought I was clear and concise with my points about the app. Something that I need to work on based on the feedback I got is definitely showing more emotions and trying to connect with my audience. After watching it back again I saw that I really did not look all that happy and seeming more excited about my product could probably go a long way. Also, I could enunciate more and talk slower to get my points across more clearly. Lastly, a good opening line would draw people into the pitch. Things I changed this time: I tried to show more emotion and be more engaging and detailed. I tried to enunciate and get my words out slowly so they're understandable. I also used my phone camera this time instead of my computer's camera so it's a higher quality video.